FrostPeak's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[V1 (ULTRAKILL)]

Good job on this artwork! Aside from a few spots, like V-1's hand, the line art is smooth and cohesive, although having utterly perfect lines isn't really the standard from what I've seen. I think it was also a good choice how the lines become thicker as V-1's palm gets closer to the foreground. I also like how you not only used lines to demarcate the geometric edges of his body, but also different shades of blue as well. The sense of perspective and his hands are also very realistic, which is nice to see.

The only things I would suggest improving on would be adding a bit more contrast between V-1's chin and the inside of his torso, maybe through adding highlights or slightly changing the color. Same issue with the lower torso. I think his wings could also benefit from a glow or gradient effect, but, eh, with the contrast already present that's kinda overrated and unnecessary, you're probably thinking. That could just be my taste. Otherwise, this is "perfection," indeed.

btw I can't help but think of vento aureo with his pose

[Flat Commission: Roshi]

One of the cleanest pieces of fan art I've seen so far. The thin line quality choice makes Roshi really aesthetically pleasing and clean, and you can clearly see his robotic details like the joints and the subtle edges in his boots and fingers. The geometry is also really clean. The color choice is also faithful to Yoshi's and provides excellent contrast between his boots, belly, and hands, and allows you to see and navigate through his different parts. His pose is great too, with his expressive hands, silhouette, and the sense of depth. I guess the only possible complaint you could lodge is the lack of shading, but the sense of dimension and shapes without are done so well that may not be necessary. Artwork like this is a lot more challenging to make than it seems, and are the pieces you aspire to make as a robot artist. :)

Chromysis responds:

Thank you so much for the critique! I'm really glad you enjoyed this robotic rendition of this yoshi! As for the flat coloration, it was a flat character commission so there was no shading in this piece. I do have other workings involving robotics that are fully rendered in my gallery.

Again thank you so much for the feedback!